CheemMan's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Life Is Good (and not a lie)]

I can't front with you, this is smooth, and i mean SMOOTH!

[good fortune]

let us see the ASS that came before this

Tajplayzs2009 responds:

i would if newgrounds would let me; i have a hold on my account for a false copyright claim :(

[Very Authentic Nu Metal]

I basically gotta agree with 23i on this one, the drums could definitely use some more grind/distortion to em. Without it, it makes the mix feel sorta empty if that makes sense? Whether that is in the good way or bad way is up to interpretation of course. Still, pretty nice 👍

TinFoi responds:

Thanks! I might make up for it in the future.

[Kukuruz008 - Low Blow]

good energy, sucker for the rhythm, love the sounds you used, and i as always, love arps, i WILL be bopping my head to this

Kukuruz008 responds:

thanks bro, means a lot

[Pikmin Theme Test]

what the others said, maybe just turn that volume dial down, eh?

[D e e p E n d]

morse code type beat, ok actual review:

I think it has an idea but it doesn't necessarily do much with that idea. Leaving it kinda... empty? It just doesn't bring much to the table. It's like a 3-course meal but they just bring the same tray of chicken and rice every time with maybe a bit more seasoning. Like the piano at the end was a neat idea but I didn't feel like it added much into the mix for me. I did like that you did add to it but overall the song just didn't change up enough really to keep me into it if that makes sense? And maybe that's the goal of the song, its really up to the person to decide how to view it as music has to be rated off of some bias. Keep it up tho!

Pilotepisode responds:

Thanks! I think I can only go up from here :D

[Magnum Opus]

Hey! Here to give an honest review! I want to say, I feel like you had good ideas for this track. I mean that wholeheartedly. I just feel like you weren't able to bake them fully. The way the drop comes in at 0:56 and 1:58 feels odd. They don't seem to have the impact you wanted them to have and I think that might be a combination of when you bring them in (feels early) and how you bring them in (feels a bit empty). Also, there just doesn't seem to be much variation from the first loop to the second loop that can really set them apart from each other. And some notes on the sorta arpeggio lead don't seem like they fit, could be just me. I hope any of what I said makes some since as I do see the vision, it just seems as if you needed a bit more time. Keep it up!

Hywell responds:

Hey! Thanks for the feedback! I know my drops are kinda disappointing, sadly I don't know how to fix that, I guess I'll have to see by experimenting, and yeah I should probably add some variation to the second part of the track.

Overall, thanks!

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I think its cool, but the mix feels all over the place for this track. That kinda took away from this track for me. I still think the ideas you had were nice!

kelestiial responds:

thank you

[loop 1]

this loop bangs